Drafting and Planning: Editing task

In the lesson today we took a short film titled 'Monday' and re-edited the film to see if we could recreate the film's narrative. This allowed us to improve our editing skills whilst understanding  how important editing is to construct narrative and tone. My idea for this short film was to show that the women here was being haunted by the ringing of the phone throughout the short film which leads to her shooting the phone however she can still here the ringing which leads to her death when it distracts her whilst she is driving. she suddenly awakens and starts her day again in a never ending cycle.